Sunday, November 21, 2010

Wizardry...



The theme for Poetry Potluck this week is Magic & Miracles, Wonder and Wizardry!  Sounds very tempting!!



WIZARDRY


We all live in the trick 
of our bodies,
draped in skin
that will fold like a fan.

A radiance resides
within my heart,
it keeps at it
till I head off,

and then it's free
to make the hurdle

into the light
and wait for its next adventure.

My soul is the wizard of my life,
enlightening the way
of all my fancies,
imagined or painted,
or prayed for
or written.

I am my present
and my past,
carrying my numbered lives,
a bundle of used up magic.

And then I see my soul again,
leaving the stage
when I depart.


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37 comments:

  1. love your entry...

    I am my present
    and my past,
    carrying my numbered lives,
    a bundle of used up magic.

    these words are divine...
    Thanks for linking up with potluck.

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  2. G' Day From Australia, I found this poem very soulful and spiritual at the same time. Very enjoyable indeed.

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  3. Oh, Lyn, I really love this piece - it's just wonderful xxo

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  4. Nice poem, let that wizard keep working that miracle time and again

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  5. I like the last verse, seeing your soul. The idea of your soul being your wizard is clever too.

    http://jessicasjapes.wordpress.com/2010/11/22/magic/

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  6. Hi Jingle-
    Thanks for your lovely comments..coming from a poet like you...!!

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  7. Hi Windsmoke-
    Happy that you found the poem to be enjoyable..thank you!!

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  8. Hi Jeane-
    I'm happy that you liked this one..I found it a little "magical" to write..thanks!!

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  9. Hi ScottB-
    Thank you...I won't be getting rid of that wizard any time soon!!

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  10. Hi Jessica-
    Thank you..I really do believe that my soul is the all seeing wizard of my existance!

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  11. Hi fiveloaf-
    Thanks for visiting!!

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  12. Hope that everything is OKAY now,
    Lyn, I am careless at times about people's names, forgive me.
    Happy Monday.

    you have talent that is different and unique, we love your entry.
    Cheers.
    :)

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  13. My soul is the wizard of my life.... beautiful! I love your choice of words! Lovely poetry!

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  14. Hi Jingle-
    I'm so appreciative of your efforts..thanks for everything! You make so much possible...

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  15. Hi Mary-
    Thanks for the visit!

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  16. Hi garciamo-
    What a nice thing to say..thanks so much!

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  17. This was just beautiful. The first stanza is brilliant.

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  18. Exit, stage left!
    (Stage right even!)

    Nice, thoughtful prose!

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  19. Hi TALON-
    Really appreciate your lovely comment...thanks!

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  20. Hi Eric,
    I always enjoy the Prompts..thank you for visiting..

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  21. I appreciate the cool twist on this theme. Thank you for opening my mind to new possibilities :)

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  22. Hi lynnaima-
    What a great thing to say! Anytime we can see something new..well!!! Thank you...

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  23. Very profound thinking here... we are all holding our own magic within, if we only let it dance on the wind...

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  24. Dear Lyn

    I liked the style of your poetry and its so beautiful.. kind of spiritual ... the kind I liked...
    Thanks for sharing..

    ॐ नमः शिवाय
    Om Namah Shivaya
    Twitter: @VerseEveryDay
    Blog: http://shadowdancingwithmind.blogspot.com

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  25. I love this. Truly magical and mystical. Kudos to you, Lyn! Nice work ... Poem on ...

    Happy Potluck!

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  26. Hi Reflections-
    Indeed, I couldn't agree with you more..it's all within...thank you!

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  27. Hi Shashi-
    So pleased to read your kind words..Always, thanks for your visit..

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  28. Hi Jamie-
    Poem on! I really like that..let's do it!!

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  29. Lovely, Lyn! That penultimate stanza says everything. Unfathomably, I was thinking along magical lines myself at the weekend and must see if I can build something out of it!

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  30. Wonderful Lyn, especially the phrase "My soul is the wizard of my life,"

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  31. "I am my present
    and my past,
    carrying my numbered lives,
    a bundle of used up magic."

    Such beauty in your words! I love this piece!

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  32. Hi Derrick-
    Not a big surprise..some minds flow together..so encouraging! Magic/spiritual, same??

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  33. Hi Jane-
    Thank you..I truly believe that is so!

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  34. Hi to The Reason...
    Thanks so much..This has become something I kind of like too!! Not always the case...

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  35. What a beautiful poem! I think I need to contemplate it to relish all the layers of meaning.

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  36. Hi Raph-
    So nice to have you visit! And thank you for the lovely comment...

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