Wednesday, November 17, 2010

MAGPIE/ Prompt #41

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STANDARD TIME

They direct us, every year,
to turn it back,
the clock,
back,
backwards,
to close down the year mechanically.

I want to grasp
on to one more hour,
make it stay,
stand there, don't move,

something I've tried to do
when I'm overly-
enthusiastic,
or a little crazy.

Find a lifeline to what's gone,
but have to settle instead
to winding the stem in reverse
so that the sun is confused
about when to shine,

but time bounces on
with uncertainty
to engulf us with darkness.

If I dream of what an hour
looks like,
I see a gazelle
leaping through the air.

I will tether it to my bed,
not let it go till springtime,
when I peer into the heart
of its intent,
and watch the flight
of an hour leaping ahead.


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35 comments:

  1. I really enjoy reading you poem - time is always such an inspirational theme- i love the line "to close down the year mechanically." because that is just how it feels - thank you for sharing

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  2. I really enjoyed this,

    'If I dream of what an hour
    looks like,
    I see a gazelle
    leaping through the air.'

    what a gorgeous image.

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  3. Oh, how I dread the changing of time in Fall. Your Magpie has made it more bearable though .... thank you.

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  4. Would that we could make time stand still, especially during moments of happiness! The images you painted here are beautiful!

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  5. Hi Marousia-
    Thanks for visiting..so glad you enjoyed this..thank you!!

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  6. Hi Brigid-
    Thank you..it's funny how images come forth when we're writing poetry!! Glad they do...

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  7. Hi Helen-
    You're so right, about the fall...working my way to springtime!! Thank you...

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  8. Hi to The Reason-
    Always a pleasure to meet a new commenter..thanks so much for your generosity!!

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  9. "but time bounces on with uncertainty"....very true. Your words portray the theme nicely. Very well written. I enjoyed it.

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  10. Hi Kind Spirit-
    So glad you liked this one..it sort of had a life of its own!!

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  11. "...the flight of an hour leaping ahead."
    Very well done.

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  12. Hi Berowne-
    Very kind of you..thanks..being an Aries, I sometimes leap ahead too soon!!

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  13. I like the idea of an hour looking like a leaping gazelle.
    Very thoughtful piece.

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  14. Hi Doc FTSE-
    Appreciate your comment..thanks so much!

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  15. Hi Little Messy Missy-
    I like the pic too. We have Willow to thank for it!!

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  16. I enjoyed this poem very much specially the gazelle and time bounces on part. Time is infinite and stops for nothing no matter what.

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  17. Hi Windsmoke-
    Thanks so much for your comment..time, I guess we all dream about somehow stopping it!!

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  18. Oh, what a fun read - I can imagine the gazelle helping out!

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  19. Hi Tumblewords-
    I'm always pleased when things are fun...thank you!!

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  20. everyone is smarter than me.
    you write such fabulous magpie,
    admirable...

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  21. Well done! Wonderful Magpie ... there is something primal and engaging about "time" as a subject.

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  22. Hi Jingle-
    Smarter than you??? You are accomplished and true blue!!! Always appreciate your input...

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  23. Hi JamieDedes-
    I like the idea of "primal"..exactly, and thanks for your thoughts!

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  24. "...I peer into the heart of its intent..." The entire piece is beautiful, but this last stanza is the icing on the cake!

    Rick

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  25. Beautiful concept of how time may be perceived...

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  26. Hi Rick-
    Thanks for your kind words..you know, it's funny about poetry, and how some phrases just show up!!

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  27. Hi Cad-
    Thanks for your comment..happy that you did visit!

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  28. to close down the year mechanically - great descripion of this event. It always is an adjustment for me. Great write!

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  29. Very nicely put. I have very mixed feeling about BST.

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  30. Hi Faith-
    Thanks for your visit and comments...I'm just getting adjusted now to ST!!

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  31. Hi Martin H.-
    Appreciate your kind words..not sure about BST??

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  32. Hope the gazelle doesn't mess up the bed too much! Just imagine the days when you looked to the skies and decided for yourself!

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  34. Hi Derrick-
    Very funny..I need all the help I can get to make up my own mind!!

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