I'VE BEEN INVITED by my friend, Jingle, to join the Jingle Poetry blog, which is posted each week from Sunday 8:00 PM thru Tuesday 8:00 PM. This week's theme is Night, Moon, and Stars. Please visit the site, and poets, join in!!
I'm offering a Haiku....
Dark star awakens bat
to wing into the purple
ashes of the day.
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that's very breath taking to me,
ReplyDeletelove it absolutely, Lynn,
you are so very thoughtful and talnted.
one sentence Haiku, but it evokes very stunning images in my mind. well done!
ReplyDeleteHappy Tuesday!
Hi Jingle-
ReplyDeleteThanks so much for all your encouragement for more poetry!!
this feels swirly to me, with the waking/ending cycle happening all at once. very cool.
ReplyDeleteSounds dreamy to me, Lyn! "Purple ashes of the day" ... hmmm. The link you've offered doesn't want to work. I think there's one "t" too many in http ....
ReplyDeleteHi Everyday Goddess-
ReplyDeleteSwirly sounds very good to me! Thank you..
lovely words..
ReplyDeleteHi Derrick-
ReplyDeleteThank you..I re-did the link..maybe now..it seems to work for me..
Tech stuff..ugh!
I agree "purple ashes of the day"...WOW!
ReplyDeletewonderful word picture Lyn - you know how to place an idea so well xxo
ReplyDeleteHi fiveloaf-
ReplyDeleteThanks for visiting!
Hi Mary Ann-
ReplyDeleteSo nice to hear from you..thank you!
Hi Jeane-
ReplyDeleteWhat a nice thing to say..I'll say the same for you!!
"Purple ashes of the day"...those beautiful words together, they sound so perfect, so real. A wonderful haiku, Lyn.
ReplyDeleteHi Sam-
ReplyDeleteThanks..I love the colors at the end of the day..
WOW!! At last I see a bat!!! Loved this unique take on the theme!! Too good! :)
ReplyDelete"purple ashes of the day" - really liked the way you have described the color of the night.. beautiful!!
Thank you so much for sharing this fine haiku with poetry potluck... it is our pleasure to have you here!