Friday, April 30, 2010

Poem in My Pocket..



WHAT A WHIRLWIND OF A MONTH IT'S BEEN.  THE PARADES FOR NatPoMo are winding down, and here we are at the end of a joyous celebration!  Poems have been gathered in bouquets, and everyone became a poet for the month!  Alas, here it is, Poem in My Pocket Day.  I hope you all have one to tuck away, carry with you if you run into a poetry drought.  I have mine, right here, just in case I have to administer a poetry transfusion.

POEM IN MY POCKET

I'll have a word,
that one there,
the one floating through the air.

Disregarding obvious rhymes,
I refuse to pander
to poetic banter.

Offering a place to land
I try to gather a word
that seems as soft as feathers.

I cup my hands and catch,
not a word
but a hummingbird.

I fit it into my pocket
feeding it a nourishing whisper
and hope it bears within,
a poem.
I let it fly away and circle me,
its wings tick-tocking
some doggerel.

It's absolute bliss,
walking through another day
as a poet,
with one new idea
that's landed in my pocket.


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14 comments:

  1. Very nice, Lyn. I like the idea of a poem as hummingbird; richly coloured, iridescent, etherial and quixotic. Enjoyed your pocket poem.

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  2. Hi Derrick-
    Thank you..that is an elegant comment..
    I'm for extending NatPo Mo!!

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  3. Ah, yes, those wonderful words floating around out there! You know I love this one.

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  4. Hi Willow-
    Poetry is never ending, right? Thanks for your kind words!!

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  5. what a lovely talent you have, and i enjoyed hearing this confession of where your 'spark' comes from :)

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  6. Lyn, what a lovely idea - you always make it sound like magic xxo

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  7. Hi sheri-
    A very nice thing to say! We just keep trying...

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  8. Hi Jeane-
    That's because I believe in magic!thanks.. otherwise we couldn't go the places we go!!

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  9. May that hummingbird sing your praises all day long. What a fantastic piece!

    Greetings from London.

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  10. Hi to a Cuban-
    What a great thing to say! Thank you!!
    Sometimes poems do just fly in..

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  11. The poem I carry in my pocket is in the pocket of my soul. It is the first haiku I wrote {for my historical fantasy RITES OF PASSAGE.}

    Dreams drift like clouds,
    I reach to the touch the moon,
    I grasp my empty night.

    Have a beautiful May. What is May the month of, anyway? Roland

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  12. Hi Roland-
    May Day, Cinco de Mayo, the Merry Month of May..who could ask for more?
    Thank you!

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  13. I cup my hands and catch,
    not a word
    but a hummingbird.

    I fit it into my pocket
    feeding it a nourishing whisper
    and hope it bears within,

    love the above lines,
    they are so delicate and stunning!

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  14. Hi Jingle-
    Thank you ..I really "saw" this image..ah, poetry!!

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