Monday, March 22, 2010

Magpie/ Prompt #6

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SPITTING NAILS

They came in the mail today,
American Brand Spitting Nails,
"For when you're really angry."

If you favor spewing tiny wounds,
the instructions tell you how
to spit the missile...

"Pucker up,
blow a kiss, turn it into
a poison dart."

Also stated, "When attacked,
don't pass the buck,
return the insult.

You may penetrate the skin with nails,
(but remember)
you can only pierce the soul
with words."

Beginners: if you prefer,
don't break the flesh,
but rend the garment
till the thread begins to unravel.

Keep in mind,
anger begins anew
as it ends,
so re-order your supply of
Spitting Nails,
today.


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42 comments:

  1. Horrifying! That is a pain filled masterpiece.

    Peace, love, salve for the soul and body.

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  2. oh, Lyn, this is just the best! A+ - you are so talented xxo

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  3. Pucker up and blow a poison dart?! LOVE it!! (I know someone who does this) hee.

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  4. Hi Butternut-
    Thank you for the comment..definitely peace, love and brown rice!!

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  5. Hi Jeane-
    You are more than kind..Thanks..I had fun carving this one up!

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  6. Hi Catalyst-
    Thanks for dropping by, and for the comment!

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  7. Hi Willow-
    Thanks for offering these endless treats. I guess it's all in there!
    I too knew a few lethal darters!!ha...

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  8. errr...do they sell anything to defend against it? great take on the prompt...i know a few...

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  9. I can almost taste the metallic...you are so good! Loved every line!

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  10. You can heal from a cut but you cannot take back the cruel words spoken

    (but remember)
    you can only pierce the soul
    with words."

    Good one
    Joanny

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  11. Hi Brian-
    How do you defend against anger..
    walk, run..get out of there!! Thanks..

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  12. Hi Mary Ann-
    Thank you so much..I enjoyed making my way through this one...

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  13. Hi joanny-
    As I've gotten older I've learned the lesson to think before I speak..thanks for your comment!

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  14. Lyn

    It is everyone's lesson.....


    Best,

    Joanny

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  15. Good call! A little scary, a little funny, a good balance.

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  16. Remind me to keep on your good side, Lyn! Very funny, very clever take!

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  17. Hi Margie-
    Thanks..I keep trying!

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  18. Hi Joanny-
    Thank you..again..

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  19. Hi Spacedlaw-
    Thank you..that's me! Scary and funny!!

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  20. Hi Peter-
    Thanks... Not to worry..I've only got a good side!!

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  21. Hi Vicki-
    Thanks for your kind words!

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  22. Loved your poem; funny, sharp, true.
    Your chose of words worked.. yes yes. Joan T

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  23. Hi Joan-
    Thank you so much..isn't it great, the directions this takes us in..love the challenge.

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  24. You are very good Lyn. I like this quite a lot.

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  25. Hi Angie-
    How nice of you to say that! Thanks for visiting..

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  26. Hi Lyn,

    Your take on these prompts is novel and so amusing! Spitting feathers is far more gentle!

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  27. Hi Derrick-
    Thanks Derrick..things just turn funny with me, and I myself am the gentlest of souls!!

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  28. Oh my...what a treat!
    This was fabulous and so original...I think I will show this one around...so true!
    And to use the word rend! I thought I was the only one who has used that biblical word in my writing!
    It is such a powerful image...
    loved it

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  29. Hi Suz-
    I'm so pleased and thankful for your response! Wow!
    These prompts are such great challenges, aren't they..and fun!!

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  30. I never thought of spitting nails as wounding another before reading your poem...just interpreted it as being angry enough to spit nails. Great twist to the saying's meaning! You really put a visual to the idea of saying hateful things.

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  31. Hi steviewren-
    Me too, always meant it to mean spitting mad..but you know, when writing, anything goes! Thanks so much...

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  32. Clever lady! The human nail gun! What an imagination! Loved this!

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  33. Hi Katherine-
    That's me...tough as nails!!..not!..I'm really anti-anger!
    Thanks for your comments..

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  34. I wonder if I imagined that I really was spitting nails I might watch what I say. I don't really want to HURT people, do I?

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  35. Hi Bug-
    Thanks for visiting..of course we don't want to hurt anyone..we must be cautious!

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  36. Hi Sun Dance Hill-
    What a nice comment...thank you!

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  37. Lyn,
    Irony, humour and timely! Great take on the prompt.

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  38. Hi Jennifer-
    A pleasure hearing from you...
    good-bye to anger, and all that!

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